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Space Madness!

Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2016 12:33 am
by Ancient History
Last year in response to someone actually fulfilling my challenge to review all of Farcast, I agreed to write a complete RPG based around three keywords. Because I'm a fucking idiot. The "winner" was Vigil and the keywords were: atompunk, wands, Mythos.

...it still isn't finished. It is, in fact, on 13.8k words. I'm still working at it, I've just back-burnered it to death, so I am starting this thread as a development diary and, basically, to help encourage me to write and finish the gods-damned thing.

This week's efforts are focused on Mars. We're in the Gazetteer of the Setting sort of section, so: Mars. This is drawing largely off Clark Ashton Smith's material, because he wrote about Mars, but I'm also stealing left-and-right-handedly from other sci-fi settings as needs must.

The system: I haven't written much of any of it yet, but that is because I plan to steal it. I have, in fact, been planning to do this for some time and have some extensive notes about what I'm going to import wholesale and what I'm going to have to change or work up, but trust me, you should recognize it when you see it - and no, it is not in any way, shape, or form related to BRP. Start with something that works and plug it into something that works, that's my motto. Frank's offered repeatedly to help (which I appreciate), but I'm digging this hole on my own and want to keep going until I hit bottom.

[edit] Link to google doc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/184P ... sp=sharing

Currently at 185 pages.

Posted: Wed Jul 13, 2016 8:01 pm
by OgreBattle
I plan to steal it. I have, in fact, been planning to do this for some time and have some extensive notes about what I'm going to import wholesale and what I'm going to have to change or work up, but trust me, you should recognize it when you see it
I hope you're stealing from Outlaw Star then

Posted: Wed Jul 13, 2016 8:30 pm
by erik
OgreBattle wrote:
I plan to steal it. I have, in fact, been planning to do this for some time and have some extensive notes about what I'm going to import wholesale and what I'm going to have to change or work up, but trust me, you should recognize it when you see it
I hope you're stealing from Outlaw Star then
Outlaw Star has an RPG system? *skeptical*

Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2016 1:05 am
by Ancient History
Been lollygagging. Finished Mars. Current wordcount 15.9k. Next up: Venus

Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2016 1:59 am
by Ancient History
17.1k Still on Venus. I've been distracted by other things.

Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2016 10:59 pm
by Ancient History
Venus finished. 18k

Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2016 7:35 pm
by Neurosis
Ancient:

If you need backup, I'm in if you'll pay me a penny per word and autograph one of my old Shadowrun books.

Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2016 11:48 pm
by Ancient History
Finished the Belt and a chunk of Jupiter. 20.2k

Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2016 2:46 am
by RelentlessImp
...Mythos atompunk. I can't wait to see this thing.

Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2016 6:17 pm
by Hadanelith
Neither can I. This sounds seriously neat.

Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2016 11:38 pm
by Ancient History
Jupiter done. 21.2k

Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2017 11:07 pm
by Ancient History
Saturn done. 23.2k

Reading Barbarella for inspiration.

Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2017 2:05 am
by Hicks
Oh god. The movie is the absolute worst.

Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2017 2:09 am
by Ancient History
The original comic, ya dork. And it's not as bad as the pornographic parody of the Barbarella film, which is just jumping the hardcore shark.

Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2017 2:40 am
by Hicks
I figured, I just wanted to bitch about the move, because it is awful and deserving of scorn.

Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2017 12:49 am
by Red_Rob
23,000 words? We have here a man who takes offhand forum bets seriously ;).

Can't wait for the result, I reckon it'll be the best Mythos Atompunk RPG featuring wands yet!

Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2017 1:11 am
by Ancient History
Projected final wordcount is ~40k once I get the mechanics done. I'm just doing the setting/fluff first.

Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2017 3:03 am
by Chamomile
A review of a 364 post blog isn't a tiny investment of time, either. I think it's fair that the reward for it not just be something half-assed over a weekend.

Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2017 7:00 am
by virgil
I still consider it a rather impressive move above and beyond what I was expecting. IMO, publicly stated as incentive for myself, Ancient is fully permitted to ask me for another review or even for me to write/make something for him in turn. Not something as big as an RPG, but up to the scale of an adventure or small module/conversion.

Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2017 8:30 pm
by Ancient History
I haven't written a proper adventure since... Zero Sum Gain for Shadowrun 4A, and that was a bit of silliness. I still resemble the last review of it.
It's dark, gritty and of adult content. The 'good guys' aren't particularly nice and the whole adventure is cast in a sea of human social effluent.
Anyway, here's hoping I can make some decent progress on it. I had fully intended to finish this damn thing last year...

Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2017 8:42 pm
by virgil
I'm not sure if you meant that as a request or an aside. If a request, I'll afford you the same guidelines; three key words and a preferred system.

PS: As a warning, my ability to write an adventure is best summarized by Red Dawn; which I believe Meikle641 posted semi-recently. I should have a number of campaign notes as well on the Trenches.

Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2017 11:13 pm
by Ancient History
It was just an aside.

Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2017 2:44 am
by Ancient History
Okay, fluff is done. 24.9k.

Next step: Mechanics!

Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2017 1:44 am
by Ancient History
Basic core mechanic/tests explained with examples. 29.5k

Next step: Character gen part 1

Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2017 12:32 am
by Neurosis
I am immediately intrigued by any game where wands make up one third of the keywords it is based on. I have a thing for wands (no homo).