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Prak
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 18, 2015 11:20 pm    Post subject: Proofreaders needed Reply with quote Add User to Ignore List

With the exception of filling out the Useful Links page and doing the scanning and cleaning for the cover stuff, the gaming notebook I've been working on is done, and I need fresh eyes to take a look at it and make sure I didn't misspell anything or put in wrong numbers for the reference stuff.

Can I get five people to take a look at the pdf and give me some feedback?
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 19, 2015 1:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote Add User to Ignore List

I can take a look.
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 19, 2015 2:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote Add User to Ignore List

I'll send you a link. I just went through and had to resize some shit, so I need to rebuild the PDF.
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Dean, on Paranoia wrote:
The book is a hardbound liars paradox.


Winnah wrote:
No, No. 'Prak' is actually a Thri Kreen impersonating a human and roleplaying himself as a D&D character. All hail our hidden insect overlords.


FrankTrollman wrote:
In Soviet Russia, cosmic horror is the default state.

You should gain sanity for finding out that the problems of a region are because there are fucking monsters there.
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 19, 2015 8:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote Add User to Ignore List

I'm willing to give it a go.
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Prak
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 19, 2015 11:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote Add User to Ignore List

Ok, I'll send you a link to v1.5.5, which has had some size revisions and a bit of revision from Jigoku's feedback.

And by send I mean here because as soon as I typed that I realized how complicated it'd going to get if I'm sending out a bunch of different versions.
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Dean, on Paranoia wrote:
The book is a hardbound liars paradox.


Winnah wrote:
No, No. 'Prak' is actually a Thri Kreen impersonating a human and roleplaying himself as a D&D character. All hail our hidden insect overlords.


FrankTrollman wrote:
In Soviet Russia, cosmic horror is the default state.

You should gain sanity for finding out that the problems of a region are because there are fucking monsters there.
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Prak
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 21, 2015 7:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote Add User to Ignore List

Ok, incorporating feedback from you guys and Jess and my own catches, as well as increasing the reference pages to 10 to mirror the ten pages in the front* I now have Proof 1.6. I think most of the first run of feedback has been acted upon, with a few things I decided against/weren't actually wrong (PF has a lot of small changes, but not as many as you thought, it appears, Emerald).

I think I'm going to give some space on the back page over to thanking people, so if you guys want to give me preferred names for such, now's the time, it seems.



*seems easier to print these if no ruled pages share a sheet with material
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Dean, on Paranoia wrote:
The book is a hardbound liars paradox.


Winnah wrote:
No, No. 'Prak' is actually a Thri Kreen impersonating a human and roleplaying himself as a D&D character. All hail our hidden insect overlords.


FrankTrollman wrote:
In Soviet Russia, cosmic horror is the default state.

You should gain sanity for finding out that the problems of a region are because there are fucking monsters there.
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 24, 2015 11:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote Add User to Ignore List

Willing proofreader here. It might take me a few days, I won't proofread drunk, and that is me quite often.
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Prak
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 25, 2015 12:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote Add User to Ignore List

That would be appreciated. I've drawn up the cover art to be scanned when I get home tonight and am pretty much finished with this project. A final proofreading would be helpful while I start working on a DM notebook. Feedback on layout and the arrangement of the reference pages would be appreciated as well.
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Dean, on Paranoia wrote:
The book is a hardbound liars paradox.


Winnah wrote:
No, No. 'Prak' is actually a Thri Kreen impersonating a human and roleplaying himself as a D&D character. All hail our hidden insect overlords.


FrankTrollman wrote:
In Soviet Russia, cosmic horror is the default state.

You should gain sanity for finding out that the problems of a region are because there are fucking monsters there.
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