You have Playing D&D with Porn Stars in your favorite blogs list. The word "porn" is on literally every page of your blog.Ancient History wrote:huh
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Scheherazade she ain't. "Story Doctor", only on the Unpublishable: http://www.the-unpublishable.com/2013/0 ... octor.html
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sorry, i'm late:
he told her was the matter? what was the matter?
that should be an on there as the second wordso of a spring day it was not strange to see her cow or one of her three goats had wandered up on top of it.
as well, not was well. for it wasn't all as well as it could have beenand more often than not she’d pour a measure from the corn-still in there was well
he had a complaint but he had not complaint? @.@A man came to her with his complaint, and he was a forthright man for he gave no complaints and did not dither about but told her was the matter.
he told her was the matter? what was the matter?
sold mold? and he bought it?So she set the tea and fetched a bit of bread with sold mold on it from out the house
alone i'd guess, not along anymore.and for some time then he lived along.
i am not sure here, wether i am just not well versed enough in the flowery language of poetry or wether the grammar is wrong there <.<;,for even young as she was she might weary at games
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Shrapnel wrote:TFwiki wrote:Soon is the name of the region in the time-domain (familiar to all marketing departments, and to the moderators and staff of Fun Publications) which sees release of all BotCon news, club exclusives, and other fan desirables. Soon is when then will become now.
Peculiar properties of spacetime ensure that the perception of the magnitude of Soon is fluid and dependent, not on an individual's time-reference, but on spatial and cultural location. A marketer generally perceives Soon as a finite, known, yet unspeakable time-interval; to a fan, the interval appears greater, and may in fact approach the infinite, becoming Never. Once the interval has passed, however, a certain time-lensing effect seems to occur, and the time-interval becomes vanishingly small. We therefore see the strange result that the same fragment of spacetime may be observed, in quick succession, as Soon, Never, and All Too Quickly.
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Either works in this case, though 'of' is a bit more obscure and maybe not the most technically correct term.Stahlseele wrote:sorry, i'm late:that should be an on there as the second wordso of a spring day it was not strange to see her cow or one of her three goats had wandered up on top of it.
It's correct as written, but I added an 'as' for clarity.i am not sure here, wether i am just not well versed enough in the flowery language of poetry or wether the grammar is wrong there <.<;,for even young as she was she might weary at games
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*pokes it* O.o
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Shrapnel wrote:TFwiki wrote:Soon is the name of the region in the time-domain (familiar to all marketing departments, and to the moderators and staff of Fun Publications) which sees release of all BotCon news, club exclusives, and other fan desirables. Soon is when then will become now.
Peculiar properties of spacetime ensure that the perception of the magnitude of Soon is fluid and dependent, not on an individual's time-reference, but on spatial and cultural location. A marketer generally perceives Soon as a finite, known, yet unspeakable time-interval; to a fan, the interval appears greater, and may in fact approach the infinite, becoming Never. Once the interval has passed, however, a certain time-lensing effect seems to occur, and the time-interval becomes vanishingly small. We therefore see the strange result that the same fragment of spacetime may be observed, in quick succession, as Soon, Never, and All Too Quickly.
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Sorry, on vacation. I had blogger post it automatically on Friday, I just never got around to posting the link here:
http://www.the-unpublishable.com/2013/0 ... satan.html
http://www.the-unpublishable.com/2013/0 ... satan.html
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Aaah!
Enjoy your Vacation then ^^
Enjoy your Vacation then ^^
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Shrapnel wrote:TFwiki wrote:Soon is the name of the region in the time-domain (familiar to all marketing departments, and to the moderators and staff of Fun Publications) which sees release of all BotCon news, club exclusives, and other fan desirables. Soon is when then will become now.
Peculiar properties of spacetime ensure that the perception of the magnitude of Soon is fluid and dependent, not on an individual's time-reference, but on spatial and cultural location. A marketer generally perceives Soon as a finite, known, yet unspeakable time-interval; to a fan, the interval appears greater, and may in fact approach the infinite, becoming Never. Once the interval has passed, however, a certain time-lensing effect seems to occur, and the time-interval becomes vanishingly small. We therefore see the strange result that the same fragment of spacetime may be observed, in quick succession, as Soon, Never, and All Too Quickly.
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dachshund?daschund
cheap steel?cheap steal
whetstone to it?whetstone too it
hadn’t flown far?hadn’t flow far
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Shrapnel wrote:TFwiki wrote:Soon is the name of the region in the time-domain (familiar to all marketing departments, and to the moderators and staff of Fun Publications) which sees release of all BotCon news, club exclusives, and other fan desirables. Soon is when then will become now.
Peculiar properties of spacetime ensure that the perception of the magnitude of Soon is fluid and dependent, not on an individual's time-reference, but on spatial and cultural location. A marketer generally perceives Soon as a finite, known, yet unspeakable time-interval; to a fan, the interval appears greater, and may in fact approach the infinite, becoming Never. Once the interval has passed, however, a certain time-lensing effect seems to occur, and the time-interval becomes vanishingly small. We therefore see the strange result that the same fragment of spacetime may be observed, in quick succession, as Soon, Never, and All Too Quickly.
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found only one thing that leaped out as wrong to me:
well written this one, i'd like to read a bit more about these two after having gotten some more star wars maybe? ^^
correct at your leisure.and the fishbowl helmet that look like a sphere of black crystal you could check your reflection in
well written this one, i'd like to read a bit more about these two after having gotten some more star wars maybe? ^^
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Shrapnel wrote:TFwiki wrote:Soon is the name of the region in the time-domain (familiar to all marketing departments, and to the moderators and staff of Fun Publications) which sees release of all BotCon news, club exclusives, and other fan desirables. Soon is when then will become now.
Peculiar properties of spacetime ensure that the perception of the magnitude of Soon is fluid and dependent, not on an individual's time-reference, but on spatial and cultural location. A marketer generally perceives Soon as a finite, known, yet unspeakable time-interval; to a fan, the interval appears greater, and may in fact approach the infinite, becoming Never. Once the interval has passed, however, a certain time-lensing effect seems to occur, and the time-interval becomes vanishingly small. We therefore see the strange result that the same fragment of spacetime may be observed, in quick succession, as Soon, Never, and All Too Quickly.
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Still midnight somewhere. More Star Wars fanfic on the Unpublishable; Eiven Task returns in "Planet of the Lightsabers." http://www.the-unpublishable.com/2013/0 ... abers.html
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The only thing I read that really stuck out as awkward was this sentence from the first paragraph:Ancient History wrote:Still midnight somewhere. More Star Wars fanfic on the Unpublishable; Eiven Task returns in "Planet of the Lightsabers." http://www.the-unpublishable.com/2013/0 ... abers.html
Other than that, it was a thoroughly enjoyable read.Cursing his mother for giving birth to a foolish and unlucky bastard, and began calculating vectors and possible routes of escape.
The rules are the game, without them you're just playing cowboys and indians with a side of craps.
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his teeth were right?with a dusting of powder on his face and around his eyes and his teeth was some sort of ceramic and faced with little gems when he smiled.
one ofto Task’s right on of Malarkov’s men misjudged his swing and took off three of his own toes
moved apartBy the time the klaxon sounded again and the sides move apart
footing. i kinda doubt they had lost their feet O.oBoth of them regained their feet
They. Or is there a both fighting too?The both moved in close
not sure but should the time not be in the past too here? so knew that they must have been made?and Eiven knew they must be made of Mandalorian iron
what is an impossible about? o.OThen his prosthetic left hand swiveled at an impossible about at the wrist
he? she?and as screamed some more as the flesh began to tear away from the bones as he kept pulling
good to his word right?Malarkov was good as his word
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i found a bit more ^^
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Yes, very enjoyable.
Such a pity that you don't write for shadowrun.
Finally somebody who knows how to be mean and cunning and make the most of his abilities and cyber!
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Shrapnel wrote:TFwiki wrote:Soon is the name of the region in the time-domain (familiar to all marketing departments, and to the moderators and staff of Fun Publications) which sees release of all BotCon news, club exclusives, and other fan desirables. Soon is when then will become now.
Peculiar properties of spacetime ensure that the perception of the magnitude of Soon is fluid and dependent, not on an individual's time-reference, but on spatial and cultural location. A marketer generally perceives Soon as a finite, known, yet unspeakable time-interval; to a fan, the interval appears greater, and may in fact approach the infinite, becoming Never. Once the interval has passed, however, a certain time-lensing effect seems to occur, and the time-interval becomes vanishingly small. We therefore see the strange result that the same fragment of spacetime may be observed, in quick succession, as Soon, Never, and All Too Quickly.
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No, in English it's "good as his word."
[/edit]Oops, forgot: Thank's Stahl! Thanks Corsair!
[/edit]Oops, forgot: Thank's Stahl! Thanks Corsair!
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Today on the Unpublishable is "Price of Alicorn," a tale of the Elf Cup. NSFW. http://www.the-unpublishable.com/2013/0 ... icorn.html
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Did not find anything that jumped out at me as wrong in this one! ^^
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Shrapnel wrote:TFwiki wrote:Soon is the name of the region in the time-domain (familiar to all marketing departments, and to the moderators and staff of Fun Publications) which sees release of all BotCon news, club exclusives, and other fan desirables. Soon is when then will become now.
Peculiar properties of spacetime ensure that the perception of the magnitude of Soon is fluid and dependent, not on an individual's time-reference, but on spatial and cultural location. A marketer generally perceives Soon as a finite, known, yet unspeakable time-interval; to a fan, the interval appears greater, and may in fact approach the infinite, becoming Never. Once the interval has passed, however, a certain time-lensing effect seems to occur, and the time-interval becomes vanishingly small. We therefore see the strange result that the same fragment of spacetime may be observed, in quick succession, as Soon, Never, and All Too Quickly.
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